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Critique by star categories: Vision; this piece has a clearly conveyed idea, the message of what is happening is clear. Originality; I ...

Hello, I found that I like doing my critiques in order of the star ratings. Vision While I don't know what the vision particularly is, ...


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Vision; this piece has a clearly conveyed idea, the message of what is happening is clear.

Originality; I was going to give you the average but I find the idea of the mirrors, the floor hooks and the lighting more original that is often found in this particular genre. Nor was this was outlandish as for the viewer to go even the possible suspension of disbelief as is sometimes found by erotic artists.

Technique; this piece was indeed skillfully crafted, with the light and the dark, which intensifies the drama of the desperation of the trainee. Although the skin does seem quite shiny, which I happen to like, but is to take note of. The texture for the drool though is perfect and exquisitely done. The reflect of the foot though is only note of a flaw.

Impact; whilst the body, lighting/general mood, is good; I find the expression on the face to be enough. His face is neither in unwilling pain, or in humiliated pleasure. From just the piece, not reading the description, I cannot discern completely the mood from piece. Is the strong emotion, lustly reaction evoked in viewer sourcing from a boy brought to unwanted pleasure, or of someone debasing themselves because agony to them is pleasure...
Hello, I found that I like doing my critiques in order of the star ratings.

While I don't know what the vision particularly is, I can see that there is one. From the choice in fabrics to the color tone; you present a clear theme, that translates to every part of this image. However this is your weakest score because of the simple pose and expression. It doesn't convey an emotion or idea.

I whole believe that within the context of photography, this is a worth five stars in originality. This character, this personal, is so complete and rich that she is one par with those that professional make for Game of Thrones or Mad Max.

The setting of this character with these clothes and these background together, with the warm light (although that might be a post-edit) complement each other. That being said the way the hair is bunched makes her head look asymmetrical and could maybe be better if her hairstyle was different of if the pose was not head on. That being said the sideways lighting is brilliant and makes her look very sensually attractive.

I feel that this is maybe personal, that what any one person might give on impact greatly varies because this grade is based on how emotions were effected. That being said I loved they way this picture made me feel. The pout lips, the warm colors, the revealing clothing, the apocalyptic bohemian vibe; it isn't like straight up sexual but instead simmering heat in me. (The only reason I didn't give it five was that the model didn't really connect with me with her eye contact and that is really important.)


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Alot of my work is for Oda's characters and ideas, I am not an art theif only inspired by his genius
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